October 14

I got an email from Ms. Wade-Chung during class that it would be alright if I came by her office at lunch to talk, which is what I did. She read through my whole Report Draft and she said that it was good - that everything I wrote was right and relevant, but that the Criterion Ai paragraph sounded a bit too listy. I also asked Ms. Wade-Chung about what to write for that prompt in the Criterion Aiii paragraph since I hadn’t shared any specific research skills with my peers over the course of this, just because it never came up in conversation. As we were talking I remembered how, in the beginning of the year my advisor had our advisory explain the Personal Project to a girl who was new to the school. Since I had gotten a head start on everything over the summer, I was also able to give her some advice about completing the documents and what to expect, which Ms. Wade-Chung said was a good answer to that. I was planning to address both of these edits when I got home after school today, but I actually got time in study-hall after French class to complete it, so I was able to turn in my Criterion A Report Draft before the final bell went off.